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Topic : Re: Quotes or no, for Hiccup I have a character unleash a monster hiccup in a scene. I'd like advice regarding whether or not it should be in quotes. Here's the scene, in summary "Hiccup!" Jane - selfpublishingguru.com

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You would not use quotations, because it implies that she shouts hiccup rather than hiccups. If you replace hiccup with bang the difference becomes more apparent.

she hiccuped = A women has just hiccuped, and this refers more to the action than the sound itself.

Hiccup! = A sound occurs, and it specifically sounded like the word used.

"Hiccup!" = Someone shouts hiccup. Presumably Stoick, from How To Train Your Dragon.


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