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Topic : Re: Asking questions in the middle of a narrative I'm writing a short story. And I realized the opening is filled with question marks: Ming was disturbed by the faint sound of a piano. He - selfpublishingguru.com

Kevin153

: Re: Asking questions in the middle of a narrative I'm writing a short story. And I realized the opening is filled with question marks: Ming was disturbed by the faint sound of a piano. He

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The questions are fine. They tell us what is on Ming's mind.

I would put first one in past tense (Wasn't it a little late...) to match the surrounding tense.

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