: Re: If not in the prologue/intro, where would a hook be? For many stories I have seen, written or otherwise, a fight or some intimate moment is used to hook the reader. It is done A LOT, if

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You should open your story by creating a question in the reader’s mind that can only be answered by reading onward. Conflict is a popular way to start, because it raises the question “who’s gonna win?”

But the conflict doesn’t have to involve fistfights and explosions. In the first chapter of Pride and Prejudice, the narrative question is “who is going to marry this fantastically wealthy single man who just moved into the neighborhood?” That’s a perfectly effective hook (especially for Austen’s original audience—think of P&P as the Regency-England precursor to The Hunger Games).

And if you do open with a violent conflict, but the reader doesn’t give a damn who wins or loses, it’s a bad hook. And if you open with a good hook, but then switch to twenty pages of boring exposition that has nothing to do with it, you will lose the reader in spite of the hook.

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