: Re: How can I add emphasis in an internal dialogue, given that I am already using italics for character thoughts? In a novel I am currently writing, characters frequently express thoughts. Following

@Murphy332

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You could always not italicize parts that should stand out. The key point is to break up the flow of the text so that it is visible somehow.

Capitalization could be interpreted as an internal EMOTIONAL SHOUT more than a sarcastic tone.

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