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Topic : Re: When mentioning two items in a sentence, should I specify which one I'm referring to in the next one? This is a bit complicated to explain. Here's an example: She had green eyes and extremely - selfpublishingguru.com

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: Re: When mentioning two items in a sentence, should I specify which one I'm referring to in the next one? This is a bit complicated to explain. Here's an example: She had green eyes and extremely

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Yes. Unless your following metaphor is easily related to one or the other.

"She has green eyes and red hair. It looked like a wild forrest fire...." Then people can easily relate it to the hair, and not the eyes.

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