: Re: How can clarity and flow of long sentences be improved? Sometimes it seems desirable to pack a lot of interrelated information into a single sentence, but such sentences can lack clarity or

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I will second CLockeWork's comment. I will also add that while parentheses work, I think commas are more readable.

John said it was constructed in 1664, during the Dutch occupation in
Taiwan, by an admiral that had decided to settle in the island.

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