: Prologues with no protagonist - How can they work? It is my understanding that novels should generally start right off with the protagonist. The story is about the protagonist, after all, not

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The thing to do with any writing rule is to consider its functional utility. One good reason to start with the protagonist is that otherwise the reader may become invested in the the initial characters and narrative and may resist transferring that interest to the main protagonist and storyline. For me, both Salman Rushdie's Enchantress of Florence and Samuel Delaney's Stars in My Pocket Like Grains of Sand committed this mistake by following up a captivating prologue with a much duller main narrative and protagonist.

I would advise that if you take this route, you keep it brief, and make sure that what you give the reader serves to prepare them for the introduction of your protagonist. In the Harry Potter example, the prologue offers a great deal of important context about Harry, and frames him as a significant figure. If it had just been (for example) a random day in the life of Dumbledore, the effect might have been quite different.

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If you read any Dan Brown books (Da Vinci Code, Angels & Demons etc.), he generally writes a prologue where the main character (of the prologue) is actually the victim of the murder that the protagonist investigates throughout the rest of the book.

There are many more authors than just J.K. Rowling who are accomplished and have managed this feat.

That being said, some of the prologues to his books are incredibly confusing, but are mercifully short.

Prologues are generally reserved for being detached from the main narrative, so even having them from a different character's point of view who is never met again is acceptable.

They can also be used for exposition that could not be worked into chapter 1, or that are needed before the beginning of chapter 1.

If you take Harry Potter as an example, the prologue establishes that it is set in a world with wizards, flying motorcycles, and a boy who is fated to do great things.

If it didn't have the prologue, it would be around chapter 4 (Not 100% on that) that the reader is even aware that wizards exist, never mind that the protagonist is one, and would be incredibly bored before then (this of course is based on the assumption the reader has lived under a rock for the last 15 years and has never heard of Harry Potter).

So as for the writing 'rules' that you mentioned, you can probably throw most of them out of the window for the prologue in relation to the rest of the story. You can have different characters, settings, time period, POV, and other things that are entirely different from the main narrative.

As long as it does its job, which is to set up the story, it can be a good prologue.

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A prologue without a protagonist can be foreshadowing events using irrelevant characters that interact, speak, or otherwise see events happening that foretell the story ahead, and hint toward the evil of the story or share exposition.

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