: Re: Are position titles capitalized when the subject is dropped Deputy is not capitalized when referred to as a position. “The sheriff had many deputies.†“A deputy, a sheriff, and a judge
When a title precedes a name, it becomes part of the name, and is capitalized:
I spoke to Constable Fraser this morning.
(You don't use the title and the person's first name. Not in American English, anyway.)
When a title comes after a name or stands alone, it's descriptive. It's not a proper adjective or adjective phrase, and therefore is lowercase:
I spoke to the constable this morning. I spoke to Fraser, who is the constable.
In your examples:
The first one is being used as a form of address. I would capitalize it. The name is implied.
“I would be most grateful for your assistance on the matter, Constable.â€
When referring to the same person in the next sentence more broadly, not as a direct adress, lowercase the title:
The constable nodded and sat down.
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