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Topic : Re: Effective techniques for describing pain I've noticed something in writing: it's difficult to convey pain, and even specific types of pain, to an audience who's comfortably sitting at home in - selfpublishingguru.com

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Don't use boring things like

She was so sad, she had felt like she was going to die and fall asleep forever.

instead use,

She was too depressed for her body to handle. She felt like there was a weight on her shoulders and it got heavier, and heavier every single day until she snapped like a twig.

make it interesting, make it so the reader/writer can understand and relate to it.


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