: Re: When is repetition good? I'm aware that, in writing, repetition is sometimes bad. For example: "You forgot my birthday!" I said. "No, I didn't forget your birthday."
Repetition gives emphasis whatever is repeated.
Repetition calls attention to whatever is repeated, especially if the repeated thing is unusual or interesting.
Repetition can create rhythms. Repeated patterns can provoke expectations in the reader.
For an extreme, haunting, brilliant example of repetition, see Rick Moody's story "Boys" (PDF).
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