: Re: What do you think about having very different tones in a single story? What if a chapter is incredibly depressive, dark, with intense language. And the next reads almost like a dialogue from
If you switch narrative tone, it will distance the reader and make it harder for him or her to achieve suspension of disbelief. If you are writing a post-modernist novel, or a post-post-modernist novel (say, a fable about life in a you-tube-saturated short-attention-span society), this might be a good thing. Otherwise, it is probably something to avoid.
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