: What's the best way to punctuate a list with an comma-containing item? Examples: She looked tough: pieced nose, broad eyebrows, tousled hair, almost spiky. I tried picturing him:

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Another option (although I can't speak for its grammatical propriety) that might help guide the reader through different pauses that help distinguish items on the list from the side descriptions of them would be to use dashes.

She looked tough: pierced nose, broad eyebrows, tousled hair - almost spiky.
I tried picturing him: his tiny body swinging above the ground, his eyes bloodshot - almost popping out - and his tongue hanging to the side like a dead worm.

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You can use semi-colons when you want to use commas as well. For example:

He had three ties: a red one, which he hated; a striped one, which he
loved; and a green one that had been given to him by his aunt.

Sometimes you can enclose extra information in parentheses. For example:

I like several different dishes: lasagne (only if it is made with
beef); pizza (has to have cheddar on it); and, chops (pork, of
course).

Punctuation isn't always an exact science. People disagree over how to do it 'correctly'. Yes, there are some places the majority of people would say you need a full stop, etc. but in other places different people would insist that their method of doing it is correct while others disagree. In these situations make sure that your meaning is clear to the reader, be consistent in what you do and just get on with it.

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Your sentences are exactly right, Alexandro. In each case what follows the comma is a list of sentence elements in apposition to each other, one that is appropriately punctuated with commas. In the first example, you have noun phrase appositives, and in the second, absolute phrases in apposition. One item in each list has a comma within it : hair, almost spiky, and bloodshot eyes, almost popping out. To me, these are not sufficiently complex to trigger the use of semicolons -- the lists are not confusing. If the items in your lists were more complex, with commas within each element, then you might want to avoid confusion by using semicolons.

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