: Re: How does the length/position of action tags affect the dialogue? Example: "Exactly." John scratched the nape of his neck. It had a faint, purple blotch I hadn't noticed before. Probably

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Aside from issues of attention that Conn Warwicker brought up, you should also consider the aspects of time when composing these sentences.

Given that you are separating dialogue specifically, readers are likely to infer a different passage of time with each composition.

The first two examples, which correct me if I'm wrong, are the same. Imply a pause in between what the character is saying, slowing the dialogue and allowing for more time to pass between his comments. This can build tension adding weight/drama to his words.
The second example speeds things up for readers. The dialogue is not slowed by an observation, but rather, the observation is an after effect of the dialogue. In cases like this, readers tend to attach less weight to the line of dialogue, as the character seems to be simply saying it, rather than drawing it out, as is the case in example 1.
Without further context, this one could be misleading. But, in the third example, we assume some amount of time is passing before the comment is directly made, which might give more weight to the observation, and less to the dialogue.

What's important to keep in mind is that, while it's possible in real life to simultaneously observe and listen to something, stories rely heavily on a narrative progression of events. So, you can make your characters observe something and listen to something at the same time, but readers are still likely to assume one came before the other--even if this ordering is slight.

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