: I want some critique on my writing Laying in a pool of vomit at one o clock on a tuesday morning in the room of a lousy hotel room was not a situation peter ever thought hed find himself

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Laying in a pool of vomit at one o clock on a tuesday morning in the room of a lousy hotel room was not a situation peter ever thought hed find himself in. But as fate would have it he lay there lifeless as roadkill on the damp carpented floor of the sleazy hotel that reeked of alcohol and cheap cigareets.

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