: It also somewhat depends on what kind of pain, but in general I would use the second person here ("You don't look good, are you OK?", "Is anything wrong?", etc.) The narrator could then could

It also somewhat depends on what kind of pain, but in general I would use the second person here ("You don't look good, are you OK?", "Is anything wrong?", etc.)
The narrator could then could answer truthfully, giving more details on the pain, or could try lying, giving his reasons to the reader only.

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