: Re: What things should one highlight as good in beta reading feedback? When I read people's manuscripts to provide feedback, I can easily identify areas worth improving. However, feedback isn't all

Beyond typos and grammar, unless you know what the writer was attempting to achieve what areas can you really say are in need of improvement?

Good and bad are merely concepts. There is only really 'like' and 'dislike'. You may comment that you found a section confusing but have you considered the author intended it to be so?

Personally, I prefer to ask questions.

Did you intend this section to be passive?

Are you aware you have used the word 'was' 26 times in the first to two pages?

Are you aware 17 of the first 22 paragraphs begin with the word 'I'?

Does the section where the character is brushing their teeth really add to the story?

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