: My revision isn't great, but I think it make things clearer by splitting the effects of subsidies and taxes into separate sentences: The increasing green movement will create subsidies for

My revision isn't great, but I think it make things clearer by splitting the effects of subsidies and taxes into separate sentences:

The increasing green movement will create subsidies for energy produced by solar panels installed on households, and may lead to a carbon tax. The subsidies will allow a wider range of households to invest in solar power technology. The tax would leave heavy polluters little choice but to cover their buildings in cheap, organic solar power technology.

There are a few things I don't understand:

Did you mean that the green movement will lead to subsides for the energy produced by solar panels? Or that it will lead to subsides for installing solar panels?
Why would the tax lead polluters to choose solar power technology that is organic?

Perhaps these questions are answered elsewhere in the article.

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