: Re: Are the following examples violations of first-person limited? We ordered pork belly, beef liver, and lamb slices—a selection that made our tongues melt and our stomachs heat up.

@Cooney417

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In both examples the POV character seems to have information they should not. They don't know how others experienced the food order, nor do they know what - if anything - Sumire is reacting to when she picks up her phone.

Instead, focus on the perception of this experience, or emphasize that these are things the POV character thinks or is assuming about the goings-on.

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