: Re: 2 questions about screenplays In the slug line, how do I write a time change??? "7 years later" {then} INT. HOSPITAL - DAY Also: how do I write verbal sounds of a character that are

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INT. HOSPITAL - DAY - 7 YEARS LATER

BATHSHEBA MOANS as she gets to her feet.

BATHSHEBA LAUGHS HYSTERICALLY.

BATHSHEBA SNORTS

BATHSHEBA
(wheezing)
Please ... stop ... don't

RON loosens his grip on her throat, but doesn't get off her.

BATHSHEBA (CONT'D)
Why ...
(COUGHS twice)
Why ...

BATHSHEBA COUGHS uncontrollably.

RON
(giggles)
You know why, darlin'.

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