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Topic : Re: Does this sign-up email announcement sound friendly and conversational? This is version 2 of this post The intended audience is from 16-45 m/f, they have given me their email address and will - selfpublishingguru.com

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I like @Craig Sefton's idea, the parenthesis do look a-lot better than just a simple comma. Also, may I suggest, in the third sentence thinking about changing "you" to "you've" aside from that, it looks okay;


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