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Topic : Re: What's the best way to add a break in conversation? In my book, I have someone calling 911 to report something, then I want a police officer informing the chief they got another report about - selfpublishingguru.com

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Use an ellipsis to imply that the call to 911 is really continued, then just pick up the new conversation with a short statement to indicate the change of scene.

Joe calls 911, "A dinosaur just crushed my car. I barely got out alive..."

At the station, "Chief, we just got another report of a dinosaur, this time in Midland!"


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