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: Sorkin: "Dialog is music" - In what way(s)? I recently watched Aaron Sorkin's Masterclass on screenwriting. One frustrating section of it (overall it's quite good, IMHO) is about dialog, and Sorkin
I recently watched Aaron Sorkin's Masterclass on screenwriting. One frustrating section of it (overall it's quite good, IMHO) is about dialog, and Sorkin says that dialog is important, it can't be taught, and it is music.
To be precise, he first says that dialog is like music, and then says that dialog is music.
One other thing that he says, which makes perfect sense, is that you can't write dialog that reflects how people "actually talk".
There is definitely a discernible style of screenplay dialog, with different screenwriters having their own sub-styles or related styles (David Mamet is particularly distinct). Can we characterize that style beyond Sorkin's terse "it's music"?
He does analyze some of his own dialog from The West Wing and I think he's talking about rhythm and meter. In my own beginning attempts at writing dialog for the stage, I have noticed that making it deliberately metrical seems to bring it closer to the "screenplay dialog style".
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Well. I'm learning as I go and I haven't seen the series. But here's what that sounds like to me.
You've identified rhythm and meter. Maybe these can be imagined as dialog that varies in its staccato or legato elements.
Here are a few more ideas.
1. There are different genres of music. (and different types of dialog can work.) One type of music is the blues. Here are some lyrics from Muddy Waters:
Baby please don't go.
Baby please don't go.
Baby please don't go, down to New Orleans.
You know I love you so.
The pattern in the blues is repeat, repeat, change.
In a lot of other styles of songs (and maybe blues too), there is a pattern of verse, verse, bridge, verse.
So, music, even music that is geared to adults, has elements of both repetition and novelty woven into it.
Dialog can do this sometimes too. The repetition can have the effect of reinforcing certain ideas. The repeats can be spaced or immediate.
'What are you doing?'
'What am I doing? I'm leaving.'
'Leaving? (etc)'
This ain't a great example, but I think the idea of repetition is worthwhile.
2. Music has chords, multiple notes, multiple instruments, and also high notes and low notes. Put that complexity into dialog.
Pairing characters with opposing values in dialog can move a story. Or simply be interesting. Imagine a mother who wants to protect and raise her child safely, and a child who just wants to go out and see the world. What is their dialog?
Or an angry boss and a meek employee. Or a single character arcing from patience to frustration during a conversation.
The dialog can reflect these 'opposing' pairs, as 'high and low' notes.
3. Music has harmony and balance.
Dialog should, too. If you have two characters arguing a point, they will not each state their case in completion and then listen to the other case in its completion. Instead they will go back and forth, and the amount of this from either character should balance out.
4. Chopsticks is hard to listen to.
So is dialog that repeats a sound again and again.
'Stop shaking the salt shaker.' is hard to read. 'Will you stop that? You have plenty of salt.' is easier.
5. Playing by ear.
I think Sorkin's right? It seems like a person picks it up with time. I don't know if it can be taught or not but I think it can be learned.
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