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Topic : Re: Can my paragraph use better adjectives and descriptions? I feel my punctuation is all over the place, and the adjectives are not as charming as I think they are. If anyone has watched the - selfpublishingguru.com

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These days, writers don't often get the luxury of lying in a green meadow, with tall trees and green grass, birds chirping, and a blue-er than blue sky. This would be a wonderful environment to write in, avoiding distractions, inspiration abound. But, alas, today the ones who love to write away all their fears and hopes are stuck in a loud noisy environment, filled with ringing cell phones and the honks of car horns and chatty people. Every writer needs their own "writing spot," a place where they can write without worrying about anything else. Their "green meadow," so to speak.


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