: Re: Describing something that doesn't exist I'm in the middle of my first draft for my novel, and I can't seem to properly convey to my audience the image I'm trying to describe. That's what

@LarsenBagley300

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I'd say it's a glass egg on its side, in a form-fitting metal cage, where you sit reclined and can look out the top.

But, yeah, focus on what you need, and remove what you don't.

If you really want to set the picture, use it for the cover, or actually add pictures into your story.

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