: Re: How to write a good birth scene? I would like to do a mystical pregnancy for a story, with the female as the main character. One of the gods from the world pantheon wishes to be reincarnated

Please have some respect for womans birth rights.

If anything, by accepting such a power she should be subject to severe pain.
Don't curse or burden her by doing such a thing any further.

I would make it a difficult, strenuous and heart gripping pregnancy ONLY in the story that you are writing which in no way affects any body else.

I think that the most important thing is conveying the fact that there is transgressions and that they are accepted and forgiven.

It should be breath taking. Perhaps you could write a stark contrast. Set it against an Earthen , green scene..colourful sky..not sure if this is on another planet...but I am kind of thinking like Avatar without the whole conflict.

Propped up by roses and greenery but in a pain that perhaps makes her black out and have visions of these gods and their realm and her having a message passed on to her so she seeks a higher calling.

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