: Re: When are single-use POVs a bad idea? I'm trying to reveal the main character's background without diving into flashbacks or actually setting parts of the story in his past. So on three occasions

@Sarah872

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This is an artificial technique, one that will strain suspension of disbelief. That's not necessarily a bad thing, however, if you aren't seeking to tell a naturalistic story. It's like a documentary, or a reality show, or a dramatic recreation, where they occasionally interview someone who talks directly to the camera about the action taking place on screen.

Be aware, however, it will stick out like a sore thumb to some readers. I personally tend to hate changes in POV because it breaks my immersion. But, as with any tool in the writer's toolbox, it's all in how you use it.

There are times you may actually want to call attention to the artifice of your narrative. You just need to be aware that is what you are doing, and make sure it matches your overall aims.

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