: While it is technically arbitrary, and you are allowed to include however many details you want, I would stick to including details that are somehow relevant. Is it important that it's apartment

While it is technically arbitrary, and you are allowed to include however many details you want, I would stick to including details that are somehow relevant.

Is it important that it's apartment 13? is apartment 13 unlucky, cursed? does MC feel unlucky?

Is it important that it's facing the sea? maybe your character likes the sea. Maybe they hate it. If they have no opinion of the sea, it probably isn't relevant, and you probably don't need to include it.

I think specific details like "I searched website.com for houses" is probably not very relevant. You want to give details that are either important to the setting or to your character. The ocean might be important to both. housing.com is probably important to neither.

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