: How can I avoid repetition of "I", while keeping present tense in first person? I'm writing a first-person fantasy novel. I can't exactly figure out how to avoid the repetition of "I" when

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I don't think the fact you're writing in present tense makes much of a difference, and if you do it'd be worth discussing why, for instance, the write-this-not-that examples in the other question wouldn't work as well in the present tense. My go-to present-tense author is Damon Runyon, and his first-person stories are also a good exercise in scant use of "I". This, for example, has the narrator more of an onlooker who's not involved much. That might not suit your purposes, but his sentence structures could give you ideas.

This survey found a 3% use of "I" by word count in one author's first-person writing. I don't use first-person often myself, but when I do the total is more like 4%. You should ask yourself whether you are overusing it. The frequency of "I" can attest to the character's extent of self-absorption, which for my protagonist was a definite character trait. You might, might, find writing a self-obsessed character works more to your strengths than worrying about your overuse.

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Sir, there is a way by which you can minimize the use of I in the first place. As you are writing a first-person fantasy you can always use other characters to tell your story in this manner you can always skip the letter I.

Let the sub-character tell first-person's story, so the story will keep everyone engaged.

it's a fantasy after all you can make the nonliving things tell your story also.

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