: Re: How to make an email less "me" centric? The CEO of the company just sent out a letter about three people who will be leaving over the next week. I drafted an email to her expressing my
Maybe it helps if you just change your viewpoint. You probably have written the mail with the viewpoint “I want this job.†Instead, consider the viewpoint â€The company will need to refill that job, and I'm a very good fit.â€
Think of an advertisement. You'll never find an advertisement that says “We would like you to buy this product. We made it to solve this problem.†Instead the advertisement will say “You have this problem? Our product will save this problem for you.â€
So, instead of writing e.g. “I am experienced in writing complex Word documents because I worked as Chief Word Document Editor for two yearsâ€, maybe write “This job requires writing complex Word documents, a task in which I could collect a lot of experience in my two-year position as Chief Word Document Editor.†Or instead of simply writing “I've got an award for being the most reliable employee in my departmentâ€, write “You certainly want a very reliable person in this job, therefore you will be interested to hear that I got an award for being the most reliable employee in my department.â€
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