: Re: How to creep the reader out with what seems like a normal person? The person in question, though this is yet unknown, is not actually a person. Instead, they are some form of eldritch being

@Candy753

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Your premise is not fully fleshed out.

What do they want?

Why are they in human form?

Why/how are they creepy? if they wear a human guise to fool humans, why would they be so creepy? They need more practice playing the role of humans?

The mind is actually easier to fool than the eyes.

What is not so easily fool is our animal instinct...

So we sense something is wrong... and yet people ignore that.. why? because our mind and our eyes override that instinct.

Are they beautiful? Do they look of promise of something?

when you have fleshed out their motivations and their power (and limitations) of their disguises, their creepiness will fall into place.

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