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Topic : Re: Improving Ad Script I am looking for some advice on how to improve a short script that I have for an advertisement/introduction video. I have been revising this for two months now. I have - selfpublishingguru.com

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Is "the easiest way to earn rewards online at the click of a button" a tag phrase you have to use? It seems a bit awkwardly worded to me. How about "the easiest way to earn rewards online at the click of a button"

I would change "Hit up our link sharing section instead." to "Hit up Visit our link sharing section instead."

Also, "you can chance your points in our weekly lottery to possibly" might sound better as: "you can chance exchange your points for entries in our weekly lottery to possibly"

I like #2 better, but a lot depends on the timing of your background video.


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