: Re: How can I express this more clearly or concisely? I'm documenting a block of computer code and would like to make it clear and concise. I'm describing a function that populates a field on

@Correia211

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Maybe break it into two sentences?

When you send this function a NUT_ID, it returns a WINGNUT_SELLER_CODE. This code is from the'THREADED_NUTS' screen in the 'Vendor' field.

I almost always use "that". (Every copy editor I've ever encountered seems determined to eradicate all uses of "which".

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