: Re: How can I represent independent individuals as part of a hive mind? The demigods of this world are avatars of the one true God known as Dea and built in the image of humanity. They are independent
Have all of your demigods be fatalistic
Demi-godly foreknowledge, or prophesy, is perhaps a result of some partial awareness of the will of the higher mind which dictates what will happen. Thus, whatever feelings or opinions your demigods might have, they simply stop short of acting contrary to the will they sense above them. Explicitly acknowledge their awareness.
"Sure, I'd love to see you go home to your family," the goddess purred. "You're so adorable with your wife; one of the happiest couples I ever arranged. And I arranged it personally. But DEA forbids that you live to the end of this day. I'm not personally required kill you - but I assure you that you cannot survive. It's out of my hands."
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