: Re: How do I apply Hemingway's dialogue techniques to my own writing? I open Hemingway's The Sun Also Rises at random (chapter 9). 'I haven't seen you since I've been back,' Brett said.
Hemingway is a great believer in minimalism. Heck, there's a software program named after him which is all about minimising word usage. His style of dialogue is all about inferring tone and whatnot from the words being said and the context. He leaves the hard work, the imagination, up to the reader and in turn focuses more on delivering the bare bones that bring out the theme.
All of the deeper stuff and specifics he leaves under the surface in a technique he calls 'iceberg theory', that is, the biggest weight of the story should never be above the surface and outright exposed, it should lie underneath, between the lines. It's not that he hasn't thought about it as a writer, he just doesn't consider it appropriate to openly expose to the reader.
However, I'm waffling considerably. If I were to channel Hemingway, I'd say this.
Hemingway eschews surplusage.
More posts by @Eichhorn147
: My answer may be short and simple, but regardless, I'll say it. The way you write women as strong and assertive without implying masculine-coded behaviours/abilities are the only ones that can
: To answer your question directly, possibly yes. If I understand correctly, you have the same scene occurring at two different times during the story, with a change in how much we're told
Terms of Use Privacy policy Contact About Cancellation policy © selfpublishingguru.com2024 All Rights reserved.