: Re: Need help cleaning up a sentence I'm having trouble with a particular sentence in my book. I had originally written: Monicaâ€™s group of friends was a diverse mixture of race, gender, and background.

Readers will notice it and it will annoy some but there's a way to deal with this!

Lampshading.

Let a character acknowledge that CUBs is a mangling of United Colours of Benetton. As a bonus, the reactions generated from that character's observation may be a good opportunity to develop personalities and dynamics within the group.

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: Why this is difficult: dramatic conventions If a description of something is unique and also can't be observed incidentally by the reader, as with a character's highly unusual physical features,

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