or understand? I'm writing a story with this

I think this is quite complicated and if you try to extend this kind of communication over time it may appears repetitive for the reader (that's why R2D2 does not "speak" too much. maybe 4 to 5 times per film).

That's being said, my approach to your problem would be:

"text here" -said the girls trying to answer the question she thought the doll was asking her.
"text here" - replied the girl out loud to the question that was made by the doll on her imagination.

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