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Topic : Re: Alternative word for "she" I am writing about a female person. I noticed most of my sentences start with "she". Is there a way to avoid using this pronoun too many times, and use an alternative - selfpublishingguru.com

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: Re: Alternative word for "she" I am writing about a female person. I noticed most of my sentences start with "she". Is there a way to avoid using this pronoun too many times, and use an alternative

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you could use descriptive words like, The brunette, The shy girl, The freckled girl.

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