: Re: How to convey suddenness when a lot is going on? So, here's a scene idea from yours truly: The giant eagle brown falcon, Horus, is fighting against a necromancer that can stop time. So the

I may not be able to give a good answer because your question is missing a lot of context, and I cannot comment as I am new. So here's the best I can do:

A good way to do this is focusing in through the other stuff to the sudden event that you want to place emphasis. The narrator/main character should still see the other stuff, but like out of the corner of their eye, not their main focus. A really good example is when (SPOILER ALERT!)

Sirius Black dies

in Harry Potter, or when

Selena dies

in Percy Jackson.

I hope this helps.

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