: Re: How to avoid constantly starting paragraphs with "The character did this" "The character did that"? This is one of the tics I've noticed in my writing recently, and it's starting to bug me.

@XinRu607

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If you can, describe the scene more. Does a bird caw (or tweet or whatever)? What color is the sky? What noises occur? Give the scene more description and you can just have some dialogue for a couple paragraphs if you want.

And it honestly looks fine if you have a character doing something at the beginning of nearly every paragraph. If it really bugs you that much, just try to say what that scene is like or just try to describe other characters.

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