: Re: I developed this character in the second book instead of the first I am a young author writing a fantasy series. In my series, I have five main characters. Camryn, Dylan, Willow, Jason, and

I think it's fine.
Character development isn't something that needs to be done right away, but when important things happen. If Jason is spending most of his time not having life-changing experiences, then this seems completely fine to me. Some readers might question why it wasn't done before but I think you'll be fine. Since he's remained mostly the same through the first book, you'll have a better idea of what he needs to become and how to do that.
As for if it would make a good twist, that entirely depends on how it's written, although you will be able to make it work unless you were trying not to.

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