: Re: Need help to rephrase this sentence to prevent a run-on I'm writing a narrative and am having a problem structuring the order of events. Here is what I have: Jamie had an 8 am flight

Punctuated as a single sentence, it's not a run-on:

Jamie had an 8 am flight so she was out of the house just after 6, leaving me to wake up, feed, and dress the girls, something we typically tag team each morning.

That series in the middle is now ambiguous, though. Who is waking up, the narrator or the girls? And singular "something" might be the wrong number, as it refers to three activities.

But it's not a run-on sentence.

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