: Re: Using pronouns properly in order to avoid confusion and repetition Sample text without pronouns: I don't remember how it started but Monica began talking about Monica's mother—a topic

@Nimeshi163

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I would replace her father with Monica's father as it becomes a little unclear who you're refering to in that section (did the mum fight with her own father or Monica's father?)

Also I'd say you can scrap the last she and replace and on the third one, she would come back with returning home so the last sentance would read:

"She would stay in a hotel for two days, returning home acting as if nothing had happened."

This will keep that sentance punchy and reduce the amount of times you use the word "she" in one paragraph.

Other than that it reads very well.

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