: Re: Should the word "The" be included in a label when labelling a character? If I reference a character, whom, for the current context is given a label, such as "The Skull", should I include the
What do the bad guys' buddies call him when talking to him? "Good morning, The Skull, how did you sleep?" Or is it, "Good morning, Skull, how did you sleep?"
Even more telling, is how his buddies refer to him in the third person. "I hope The Skull tells me to make coffee." Or, "I hope Skull tells me to make coffee."
Also telling is how the bad guy introduces himself. "Hello, I'm The Skull." Or, "Hello, I'm Skull."
If "Skull" is more like a title (e.g., Boss, Colonel), then it's definitely lowercase "t". Example: "I'm making coffee for the Skull. What's that, Skull? OK, Skull. The Skull wants you to make him some scrambled eggs."
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