: No, my first read, I thought the spring was a real spring in the Earth, like a geiser, because right before you're talking about real mining. Maybe try something like: Those days mining

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No, my first read, I thought the spring was a real spring in the Earth, like a geiser, because right before you're talking about real mining. Maybe try something like:

Those days mining in the depths of West Virginia have released the
flamy springs that had lain dormant in me since my first day on Earth.

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