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Topic : Re: How to describe a hypnotized state? I'm making a computer game. In one of the dialogs, one of the characters observes some factory workers who have been brainwashed by some alien species and - selfpublishingguru.com

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: Re: How to describe a hypnotized state? I'm making a computer game. In one of the dialogs, one of the characters observes some factory workers who have been brainwashed by some alien species and

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You could try "in a trance":

trance: a half-conscious state, seemingly between sleeping and waking, in which ability to function voluntarily may be suspended.

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