: There are several tools you can use to infer distress through your narrator. Have your narrator ask a confusing question, and then correct themselves. Have your narrator ask for clarification

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There are several tools you can use to infer distress through your narrator.

Have your narrator ask a confusing question, and then correct themselves.
Have your narrator ask for clarification on something the other person said as if they missed what was said due to distraction from the pain.
Have your narrator interrupt part of the dialogue with thoughts of the pain or distress they are going through.

You can also do this from the other persons point of view by having the speaker demand the narrator pay attention, or they could ask the narrator if they understand because they look confused.

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