: How to deal with awkward pronoun repetition? Example from my writing: Aru smiled back at him and at his thought. “I think there’s no need to find him.” So what if Ichi wasn't

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Example from my writing:

Aru smiled back at him and at his thought. “I think there’s no need to
find him.” So what if Ichi wasn't a prime number? Their hearts
combined would produce a one, one that might make her
infinitely happy.

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What to do in cases where you have awkward pronoun repetition?

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