: Re: Are the following examples violations of first-person limited? We ordered pork belly, beef liver, and lamb slices—a selection that made our tongues melt and our stomachs heat up.

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We ordered pork belly, beef liver, and lamb slices—a selection that made our tongues melt and our stomachs heat up.

We ordered pork belly, beef liver and lamb slices -- a selection we knew would make our tongues melt and our stomachs heat up.

Rattled by a sound or shake that only Sumire had detected, she picked up her phone.

Sumire suddenly appeared rattled, and reached for her phone. "Did you guys feel that?"

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