: Re: Help with my story - elements of a scene Iâ€™m writing a story where a vampire pulls a girl into a room so he can feed off her without anyone knowing. What are the things I should consider

There are three main elements to the scene described here, and they can be written using cues like these :

The character of the vampire. What is he thinking when he pulls her into the room? What does he look like? How does he show he's too strong for her? Does he say anything?
The character of the girl. What does she think? What was she thinking before the vampire found her? How does she react?
The room. What does it look like? Is there anything else in the room? Is there a door? If so, describe it. Can the girl hear sounds from other people outside the room?

These are just some basic ideas to nudge the story along. Many of them will have been defined by what the vampire and the girl have done up to now, but there could be events during this scene that affect character development and where the story goes from here.

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