: Re: Help with my story - elements of a scene Iâ€™m writing a story where a vampire pulls a girl into a room so he can feed off her without anyone knowing. What are the things I should consider

A girl being pulled into a room by a man against her will is going to assume she is about to be raped, and possibly murdered in the bargain. She will scream for that, and fight that, even if she is being overpowered. Do not forget she has a voice, she has teeth, she has arms and legs and feet to kick with and fight with.

Do not let her surrender to her fate, she can stomp, kick, knee, swing, elbow, bite, scream repeatedly, and even use her head to butt him in the face. A girl fighting for her life is not passive and should not just give in. She should fight to the end. If possible, make it cost your vampire some pain.

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: You can have fun with it. For example, "Invader Zim" is, most of the time, evil vs. evil, but it's all humorous, so although you recognize Zim winning is bad, you don't mind so much. Also,

: Can religions like Islam or Hinduism be represented respectfully in a fictionalized/fantastical Earth? I asked this question in World-Building but it seems better fit for Writing. I ask for a

: I have another answer, earlier, about motivations. I am not combining this one into it, because it answers the question more literally. The most fundamental advice I can give that I wish I

: Is it possible for "weakness" to be a "virtue" in context? I'm working on a teen romance. The event is the high school play, the "Sound of Music," in which there are two main contestants

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